Tuesday, October 6, 2015

CHOI SEA HEE(최세희)/My boyfriend/Thu 1-3pm

Few months ago, I got my best friend in my life. His name is Se-Young. I call him "honey" in Korean. We've been just known each other for 3 years. But it has been very recent when we started to become in deep relationship.

 

He has black short hair with such a white skin. His eyebrows are really eye catching, because he has thick black eyebrows like me. He is not that tall and he looks pretty young for his age. When I look at him, he always eye contacts me and smiles. He has shining light brown eyes. He usually wears very simple clothes making him neat and tidy dresser. When he talks to me, he always tries to remember everything I say in full concentration.

 

I remember him saying "Do everything you want, then I am going to feel happy as well". When I have trouble or when I have concerns in my mind, he always says "Try to do everything you feel like doing without any stress and regret". I feel very relieve when I hear that. Another thing I remember is him saying "Life without fun is nothing". He finds fun in every little thing. For example, he thinks it is really fun and happy to lie down on the bench at the park near his home when going back from university or at the end of day. Also, he thinks it is really fun and happy to walk at the Cheonggyecheon Stream while listening to music and eat Tteok-bokki at the outdoor market. Another thing is that he loves to play guitar and music. He finds joy finding music that perfectly matches the situations.

 

Other people say that he is such a mystery person, because he never talks about his own private life to others, even to his closest friends. He tries not to speak out loud on something he is not quite sure about. Everybody says "he holds his tongue and he is secret as the grave".

 

So, currently, I feel like I found my best friend in my life and I wish this relationship goes forever, hopefully.

 

5 comments:

  1. Hi, this is Donghee from the same class. Your description on your boyfriend was detailed enough for me to imagine what kind of person he is. It started with his physical appearance and onto his personality. I personally think the fact that he rarely speaks about his private life or something he's not entirely sure about, is a good trait of him. Last class you said to me that he majors in music, and I want to read more about it. And even though the reason you chose him as the topic is obvious--well, he's your boyfriend--you can write the reason specifically. I'd like to read an edited version of yours!

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  2. Hi, this is Chun Young Ho from the same class. Your description on your boyfriend was very detail so it was easy to imagine him. It started with his physical appearance and onto his personality. Your description about appearance of him contains a lot of love. According to your description about his personality, I think he is very good guy. "Also, he thinks it is really fun and happy to walk at the Cheonggyecheon Stream while listening to music and eat Tteok-bokki at the outdoor market." This part can be changed into " ~ with listening to music. Also he likes to eat ~" Though it is quite private area, you can enhance the essay by showing more informations. I'd like to read an edited version of yours!

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  3. Hey, Sea Hee, this is Seo Young Yu, and thank you so much for sharing your writing! I enjoyed reading it because it is just nice to read or listen to someone else's love story. I can feel so much love from your writing and it makes me feel warm. Your description on your boyfriend's physical appearance and personality got my imagination going and it made me think of a real person as he is. I think you might try to improve on your structure so that it can be more organized!

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  4. Few months ago, I got my best friend in my life. His name is Se-Young. I call him "honey" in Korean. We've been just known each other for 3 years. But it has been very recent when we started to become in deep relationship. The reason why i chose him to describe for the assignment, is that he is the one who recently been close to me.

    He has black short hair with such a white skin. His eyebrows are really eye catching, because he has thick black eyebrows like me. He is not that tall and he looks pretty young for his age. When I look at him, he always eye contacts me and smiles. He has shining light brown eyes. He usually wears very simple clothes making him neat and tidy dresser. When he talks to me, he always tries to remember everything I say in full concentration.

    I remember him saying "Do everything you want, then I am going to feel happy as well". When I have trouble or when I have concerns in my mind, he always says "Try to do everything you feel like doing without any stress and regret". I feel very relieve when I hear that. Another thing I remember is him saying "Life without fun is nothing". He finds fun in every little thing. For example, he thinks it is really fun and happy to lie down on the bench at the park near his home when going back from university or at the end of day. Also, he thinks it is really fun and happy to walk at the Cheonggyecheon Stream while listening to music. Also, he likes to eat Tteokbokki at the outdoor market. Another thing is that he loves to play guitar and music. He finds joy finding music that perfectly matches the situations.

    Other people say that he is such a mystery person, because he never talks about his own private life to others, even to his closest friends. He tries not to speak out loud on something he is not quite sure about. Everybody says "he holds his tongue and he is secret as the grave".

    So, currently, I feel like I found my best friend in my life and I wish this relationship goes forever, hopefully.

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  5. Few months ago, I got my best friend in my life. His name is Se-Young. I call him "honey" in Korean. We've been just known each other for 3 years. But it has been very recent when we started to become in deep relationship. The reason why I chose him to describe is that he is the one who recently been close to me.

    He is not that tall. He is about a span of a hand taller than me. He looks pretty young for his age. He has black short hair with such a white skin. He has pimples on his chicks like a teenage boy which make him look much younger. His eyebrows are really eye catching, because he has thick black eyebrows like me. His eyes are bit small and slanted upwards slightly.When I look at him, he always eye contacts me and smiles with slight wrinkles near his eyes. He has shining light brown eyes. He usually wears very simple clothes making him a neat and tidy dresser. When he talks to me, he always tries to remember everything I say in full concentration. That is why I remember so well how his eyes look like.

    I remember him saying "Do everything you want, then I am going to feel happy as well". When I have troubles or concerns in my mind, he always says "Try to do everything you feel like doing without any stress and regret". I feel very relieve when I hear that. Another thing I remember is him saying "Life without fun is nothing". He finds fun in every little thing. For example, he thinks it is really fun and happy to lie down on the bench at the park near his home when going back from university or at the end of day. Also, he finds it really fun to walk at the Cheonggyecheon Stream while listening to music. Also, he likes to eat Tteokbokki at the crowded outdoor market. Another thing is that he loves playing guitar and music. He feels joy finding music that perfectly matches the situations.

    Other people say that he is such a mystery person, because he never talks about his own private life to others, even to his closest friends. He tries not to speak out loud on something he is not quite sure about. Everybody says "he holds his tongue and he is secret as the grave".

    So, currently, I feel like I found my best friend in my life and I wish this relationship goes for long long time, hopefully.

    ReplyDelete